Have
you ever attended a party without any will?
stayed there
to enjoy and told yourself to chill..
Have you
ever eaten a dish served below your expectation?
ate it to
fill yourself and gauged the level of satisfaction..
Have you
ever forcibly met someone again and again?
yet spoke to
them at length and couldn't refrain..
Have you
ever compromised on the clothes you bought?
only to tell
yourself they are not that bad; as you thought..
Have you
ever half-heartedly danced to a song?
and told
yourself to forget for how long..
Honestly tell me, have you ever faked a smile?
and convinced yourself it is going to be just for a while..
Honestly tell me, have you ever faked a smile?
and convinced yourself it is going to be just for a while..
But have you
ever nonchalantly lived against your wish?
only to
realize each day life is - cry and drink the same water like a fish!
*only to realize each day life is - cry and drink the same water like a fish!*
ReplyDeleteWOW ..this is amazing! wat a thot, meghzz :)
just loved reading it..
That was a quick response :P .. Check your phone I dropped a text asking if you are free.. :) Wanted to share this with you :)
DeleteThank you.. :-*
One word... Awesome... :)))))
ReplyDeleteThank you Ayushi, I was trying to take a nap when I realized I need to add two more lines and need to make changes to the title :D also.
DeleteBeautiful, staright-from-the-heart, delightful :) Every words reminds about something, most us might have encountered some day in our lives. I always thought I never gave up on my will (it's like that 90% of the times), but 10% in our hearts we know when crunching our will we do something... Wonderful read. Take care dear Megha :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Tanya, especially for the last four words.. :)
DeleteI am touched to read such a warm remark... I am sure we all want to live lives on our own terms but learn to make up with time and changes it brings along our way :)
Loved it ! It is Beautiful :)Sums it all - if one has not experienced such NOISEs - he has not lived - thank you for giving words to this beautiful feeling all of us must have sensed at some time or the other...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Panchali :) for visiting my Blog and m so glad you liked my words..
DeleteYou are absolutely right in saying.. "one has not lived if he has not experienced these noises" :)
Good sonnets MindBloing composition of word.
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Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving an encouraging remark! :)
Deletehey .. correct this one *clothes your bought?*
ReplyDeleteclothes you bought.
n i liked the way u put the poem earlier..
Corrections done :) and I couldn't help but add those two lines :)
ReplyDeleteMadammm ..we still gotta talk abt them.. rememberr !!
ReplyDelete:D Okie dokie Ping me whenever you are free :D I insist on meeting.. :)
DeleteIts our everyday life ...you have added rhythm and turned it into poetry...beautifully woven into words...
ReplyDeleteCheers
Take good care of yourself.. :)
:) Thanks for wishing me wellness!
DeleteI am glad you liked it.. :) Thanks for dropping in and leaving a remark.
The reservoir of wishes is always up to the brim...so always wishing you wellness and smiles :)
Delete*hugs* :) ..
DeleteHey Megha, this such a beautiful read! Lyrical, simple yet with profound depth! Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Apala :) I loved your story as well.. It was so serene just like the protagonist of your story :) ..
DeleteThanks for dropping by and appreciating my work. :)
u bet we all have, Megha! u've brought out the feelings so well, found myself nodding my head in agreement as i read each line!
ReplyDelete:) :)
DeleteThanks.. for visiting and leaving a remark :)
I am so sorry Tanya..for not being bale to make it.. but I am sure you will read a Candid- Liebster post :) ..on my Blog very soon :)
ReplyDeleteYes it is absolutely true. Loved this...it is so true...each line evokes a different feeling for each one of us!
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