Sunday, December 19, 2010

Broken dream.. :(

Like a child dreams of flying one day..
I too had a small cherished dream at bay,
A simple wish of doing the undone..
unfortunately it was approved by none,
My heart skipped a beat at it's realization..
I was fearless and excited-no inhibition,
I got what I wanted and desired for long..
it soon became a part of me, that was called "wrong",
I was hurt, now I could feel a drenched dream..
in the tears of mourning and unchained screams,
It was gone. It wasn't with me anymore..
but the memories, it's feeling is what I will store,
Etched in my heart forever and ever......
Scribbled by at

8 comments:

  1. DeepanjanaDecember 19, 2010 at 11:47 PM

    hello Megha,
    Wie geht es Ihnen? Ich habe erst A2 stufe abgeschlossen.
    Thank you for stopping by my blog. I see you live in Delhi! I myself have lived there for 5 years and went to Delhi University.

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  2. MeghaDecember 20, 2010 at 12:01 AM

    Hi Deepanjana,
    Gut Danke! und dir?
    Ich lerne Deutsch. Ich habe Prüfungen für Stufe A1 gegeben. Ich finde dein Blog sehr interessant.
    Ja, ich wohne in Delhi. :-)

    I would like to follow your blog and keep in touch with you, Hope you won't mind.

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  3. Priya SureshDecember 20, 2010 at 1:07 AM

    Hi Megha,

    Thanks for stopping by, also for ur comments, i have linked my chocolate mousse in my post, pls do check dear, u have a beautiful space..

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  4. MeghaDecember 20, 2010 at 1:14 AM

    @Priya- I have checked the recipe :-) .. Thanks for your prompt response!

    and m glad you liked my blog.. I have started recently, I would be equally delighted if you leave your responses to my posts..if you get time to visit again.. :)

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 at 2:55 AM

    Hello Megha,

    Thanks much for your kind words.1st date was one odd work that I scribbled after being greatly criticized for my first work "The Will".
    I have written another poem "2194 days" which again will gain a lot of criticism....well thats how I like to write.

    Thanks.

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  6. UnknownJanuary 18, 2011 at 3:07 AM

    Hello Megha,

    Broken Dream is definitely the cream in the jet stream of the poems you have written.The thought was rejected,negated and leaves the poet chained in agony, i like the rhyming as well. Awesome work!!

    Thanks.

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  7. MeghaJanuary 20, 2011 at 12:57 AM

    Anupam,

    Thanks a lot for your words of appreciation! :) They meant a lot!
    I re-read the poem once again.. just now..!
    Well,
    I like your writings, you are great with rhyming, I must tell you that. Criticism should not obstruct your pen or will :P
    I will hop on to your blog now to give 2194 days a reading :) ..

    *hugs* .. Megha!

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  8. AnonymousAugust 18, 2011 at 8:43 PM

    beautiful poem... take care of yourself :)

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